Chapter 1 Progress

Now that I have begun working one the outline of the comic panels I have also begun to add the full color to chapter 1. In addition to this fact I sent the working progress files to some of my classmates to get real feedback on how the comic was flowing.

Here are some of the suggestions that Stephanie gave me to help the story flow better.

In addition to adding these suggestions I decided that It would be a good idea to make a rough proof by printing the pages that I have with the new changes and seeing if they all flow well before sending them off for a final proof. After making the suggestions that Stephanie gave me I think the pages flow so much better.